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CHAPTER ? - PAGE 3

(Transcript and visual captions below}

Okay, okay... just do it. He waited for the Grey Menace to reach a break in the conversation with the tall skinny guy, but it just kept going on, no room to get a word in. His hands were freezing, but he felt like he couldn't move to put them in his pockets. He felt like his breathing was too loud, and he had to scratch his forehead but then what if they saw him? Then-- ..oh come on, I should have gone pee before I left...

In which the Grey Menace gets menaced.

  
The alleyway had become so dark that Karl could only see the drifting snowflakes in front of his face. He started to feel a bit light-headed after the shock. It was like a dream where it started with one story, then got confused and transitioned into something else. It couldn't be real... but there he was in the cold with his feet on the cold pavement and his hands going numb.


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     July 6th, 2013
     By:  Kelly

Heh heh heh, I've been waiting to do this page for forever. Trust me, I'm going somewhere with this... Sorry for the sort of anti-climax. xD

PS-- Finally got those last five dollars so I'm gonna shoot for getting another page up before the 10th! I start my summer job this week though so I'm not sure it will happen but I will try.

            

TRANSCRIPT: This is the text of the comic, for purposes such as translation and internet searches.

1.)

(Demetri glances back at the plume of steam coming from behind a tree.)

DEMETRI: Ah, a heavy breather behind that tree. Hello. Want to show us your erection yet? I’m sure we’ll be thrilled.

2.)

(Karl shows himself to make his big accusation with a shaking finger.)

KARL: No! God... Um-- Th-the Grey Menace I-- *coff* The Grey Menace I presume!?

3.)

(Demetri and Jack look on, intrigued.)

DEMETRI: ...Now that’s a surprise.

4.)

(Demetri begins his defense, Jack is in the blurred background, raising an eyebrow.)

DEMETRI: Why would you think that?

5.)

(Jack comes into focus, leaning forward and looking startled.)

DEMETRI: More importantly, what do you hope to accomplish?

6.)

(Jack steps back with a freaked out face.)

DEMETRI: I assure that whatever evidence you think you’ve got will be com-- unable to identify who it really-- and why would anyone think--

7.)

(Karl is baffled.)

KARL: ...

8.)

(Demetri glances back at the frozen Jack, not feeling like dealing with this scene any more.)

DEMETRI: Hello? Eh.... Uh, Jack? Maybe... you can handle this one?

9.)

(Demetri steps behind Karl who begins to approach Jack. He gestures for Jack to 'call him.' )

KARL: Jack!? You-- Oh my God.. Really!?

DEMETRI: Call me

10.)

(Karl continues to approach as Demetri turns into a bat right behind him, flapping away.)

KARL: Wh- I.. Jack Ballard? You-- I didn’t... Oh..

11.)

(Jack steps back as Karl approaches.)

KARL: You look really different, I didn’t-- I mean...

12.)

(Karl tries to get Jack to talk to him, Jack keeps stepping back.)

KARL: Do you recognize me? I know it’s been a long time but--

13)

(Jack looks back to a streetlight which suddenly goes out with a 'FZZT', the alley becomes dark and Karl tries to stop him.)

KARL: Wait...!

13)

(Karl calls into the darkness.)

KARL: Jack?

14)

(Karl has a sudden realization, casting about uselessly in the darkness.)

KARL: Oh god no! The Grey Menace! -- FUCK!

 
 
 
 
 
 
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