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CHAPTER 9 - PAGE 21

(Transcript and visual captions below}

     RING RING
     "Hello?"
     "Angela! We have to talk!"
     "Who is this? I can't tell. Your voice sounds strange..."
     "F-- It's SARAH."
     "Is it? Are you sure? You sounded like Vitus. Hello? Are you there? Who is this?"
     "ANGELA. I have to tell you about--"
     "I really don't feel like talking on the telephone right now. Vitus keeps calling me tonight and it's very annoying and I'm trying to work on something and I just don't want to talk right now."
     "...REALLY?!"
     "Yes, why don't you write me a nice letter? People never write letters anymore. I really prefer them, this just feels so impersonal.
I can't even think straight when you're talking. I just don't understand what you're talking about and I want to go. I don't want to talk, I'm sorry. Okay I'm going to hang up the telephone now.... I'm doing it. Goodbye.......................... *fumble fumble* Wait-- am I--*click*"

 

In which good help is so hard to ~fiend~ ... REEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEE

 

      Theodore's attacks were amazingly quick. Vitus found himself flopped on to the floor before he even had time to react. Blood was pouring from his face and he could hardly even gather how or why. He kept trying to get up, it had been a long time since he felt like this. He'd been lazy about getting blood lately, too much going on, no time. Something hurt and he fell down again. He couldn't get up. He felt very tired...

 

 

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     May 9th, 2013
     By:  Kelly

Oh dear! Poor Vitus. I hope the last row isn't too hard to follow, I wanted to fit more panels in for more funtainment. We draw ever closer to the end of the chapter, what terrible things await?

PS other fun updates-- cool fan arts from Kieran, and a donate button on request! Gosh, we are so magnanimous to let you guys give us money. xD But seriously, only donate if you can afford it, cause we love you guys and don't want you to go broke and stuff. <3

 

            TRANSCRIPT: This is the text of the comic, for purposes such as translation and internet searches.

1.)

(Vitus rushes into the room.)

VITUS: ANGELA!

2.)

(Angela sits sideways on a chair, casually.)

ANGELA: Yes?

3.)

(Vitus is relieved, throwing back a hand on his head dramatically)

VITUS: Oh thank God. I thought--

4.)

(Vitus points back at the door, Angela doesn't look up as she works on something in her lap.)

VITUS: Who was at the door?

ANGELA: Hm? Oh it was just a maid coming to pick up the towels. Why the fuss?

5.)

(Sombreta has red ribbon wrapped around her hand as she speaks)

ANGELA: Anyhow, remember that magic I had talked of? It is so simple. One just pins the prepared nails through a scrap of paper.

6.)

(Angela explains as she winds the ribbon around the nail, Vitus taking it in)

ANGELA: The paper has a name inscribed. That person’s soul will be pinned to our world. It only works for a short time though--

7.)

(Sombreta and Vitus look up at the sound of the doorbell)

FX: DING

OFF SCREEN UNKNOWN: I'll get it...

8.)

(A familiar maid answers the door, her eyes bloodshot and her face and hair sweaty. Vitus tries to stop her in vain.)

VITUS: NO!

EDITH: Yes sir please come in

9.)

(Theodore steps in the door, holding his sword. Edith leaves, a bit of her bloody ear visible.)

THEODORE: Thank you Edith.

10.)

(Theodore drops several horseshoes which clang against the word-- Sombreta's weakness.)

FX: KLANG

11.)

(Vitus and Sombreta are flabbergasted, speechless.)

12.)

(Theodore saunters in the room, posing casually with his sword.)

THEODORE: Hello. Well, ‘en garde’ then.

13.)

(Vitus holds out an arm to protect Sombreta, who is still shocked by the enemy's arrival.)

VITUS: I won’t let you harm her!

THEODORE: Ugh, you little gnat!

14.)

(Theodore frowns.)

THEODORE:  Jack just asked that I don’t kill you. Don’t make me disappoint him!

15.)

(Vitus is confused, Sombreta hides behind him.)

VITUS: Jack...? Wh-- He told you--

THEODORE: Yes! Just today!

16.)

(Theodore slashes Vitus in the face with the sword as Sombreta looks on in terror.)

THEODORE: He’s MY FRIEND now!!

19.)

(Vitus has fallen, blood running from his wounded face, several cuts on his jacket from subsequent attacks. Theodore rests a foot on him saucily.)

VITUS: U-use the nails!

THEODORE: Are you done?

20.)

(Sombreta looks on in horror, lifting the nail with one hand.)

THEODORE (off screen): As for you, Jack made no special request.

14.)

(Theodore laughs most eerily.)

THEODORE: HA HA HA HA HA

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
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